DTP Portfolio: Editing
We can edit your draft text and improve organization, grammar, spelling, syntax, style, tone, attribution, and more. Here are editing samples:
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COMPLIANCE: IT'S THE LAW...AND LIKE all laws, it's inevitably broken. |
Without enforcement, the law is a toothless crone, studiously ignored by most. |
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There are several different ways to work with your clients on their budget. And I’m sure you will work with all walks of live. We have worked with clients with a $5,000 budget, all the way up to a $500,000 wedding. Besides the extravagance, the quantity of guests, the magnitude of the event, and the size of the hall, there was not that much of a difference. |
There are several ways to work with your client’s wedding budget — no matter the size. We have worked with couples on a $5,000 budget and also planned a $500,000 wedding. Other than the extravagance of the event, the number of guests and size of the hall, there wasn’t that much difference in how the budget was divided. |
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| The following example shows, in addition to grammar and clarity editing, re-organization of information for a more useful and focused statement. |
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What is consulting?
Consulting is a serious profession dedicated to providing valuable advice that improves the client's condition for a specific need from the client's perspective.
Consulting Services
- Assisting on the management to define and achieve their goals with utilization of resources.
- Helping to identify problems and recommend realistic and practical solutions.
- Proposing changes and also helps on implementing them.
- View, analyze and report opportunities.
- Provide impartial and independent advice.
- Treating Client information as confidential.
The area of advice can be equally varied including:
- strategy
- technology
- finance-
- marketing operations
- human resources
- customer relations
- business performance
- change of management
- communication
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Community management consulting
Our consulting service provides communities and independent community managers with valuable advice and feedback on proposed actions, procedures and opportunities. We provide impartial and independent advice, while keeping all client information confidential.
Consulting services include
- Assisting management to define and achieve their goals with available resources
- Helping to identify problems and recommend realistic and practical solutions
- Proposing changes and helping implement them
- Viewing, analyzing and reporting on opportunities
Consulting topics include:
- business performance
- change of management
- communication
- customer relations
- finance
- human resources
- marketing operations
- strategy
- technology
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